I'd say go with the fade over the hand montage, and the shot of him looking sad doesn't need to be as long.
Neither do some of the other shots either I thought, as I tried 'watching' it in my head.
And we might get away with not including the fridge and the kitchen pan in the minute parameter, like saying it's similar to the closing credit scene or something, I don't know.
But I reckon a lot of it is cutting down shot length as opposed to cutting storyline, but that is going to be a factor somehwere too.
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